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Your Dark Poison - Poem by ~AlikatPunkRocker:iconAlikatPunkRocker:



Your Dark Poison

Your dark utterances make my mind swirl in toil,
These words you have spoken force me to burn midnight oil.
"How can such darkness," I cry "fill a persons soul?"
"That they make an acidic poison in my heart leaving a hole?"
Your darkened soul is what compels me to feel this,
So much that it feels as if I were in dismal bliss.
I see you, writhing in silent agony eating at your heart,
In torment you reside as it tears your skull apart.
I wish to tear from this empty carcass my very own flesh,
It's as if our souls wish us to mesh.
The love I carry for you urges me to share in your sorrow,
I only hope you may have a brighter day on the 'morrow.
Such hope is made in vain as I see you suffer day by day,
How oft I wish to comfort your weary soul and wisk the pain away.
I must find a cure for your dark poison with haste,
For if I don't...
All this pain has been a waste...
©2007-2009 ~AlikatPunkRocker
:iconalikatpunkrocker:

Author's Comments

I made this poem back in my Senior year of high school. It's basically talking about how it effects us when we see our loved ones in pain. How it makes US feel; just as bad as they do. This was made for a very good friend of mine when he was going through a very rough time.

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:iconestilotimida:
I like the droning rythym. Very nicely put.
:iconalikatpunkrocker:
Thank you!!! I love it I'm getting attention!!! Hahaha!

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:iconeinnobztron:
wow! the rhyme is great!

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it's important to take some time once in a while to stop and laugh at the roses
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:iconpurple-ninjas:
ooh! i like it! its got a good feel to it

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~~ When I close my eyes,
Reality overcomes me
I'm living a Lie.~~
:iconalikatpunkrocker:
Wow thanks a lot!

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Icon made by =wewtXD Thanks ever so much!!!

"I would do anything Tim [Burton] wanted me to. You know - Have sex with an aardvark... I would do it." - Johnny Depp

The above quote....BAHAHAHAHA! JD = Teh Win.
:iconalikatpunkrocker:
Thank you! :hug:

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Icon made by =wewtXD Thanks ever so much!!!

"I would do anything Tim [Burton] wanted me to. You know - Have sex with an aardvark... I would do it." - Johnny Depp

The above quote....BAHAHAHAHA! JD = Teh Win.
:iconeinnobztron:
welcome!

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Here's my question: why is it called common sense if it's so rare?
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it's important to take some time once in a while to stop and laugh at the roses
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Project Reciprocation member --> [link]
:iconpurple-ninjas:
your welcome ^^

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~~ When I close my eyes,
Reality overcomes me
I'm living a Lie.~~
:icontorturedremembrance:
Wicked awesome! :D

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