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Can't He See?

Can't he see me?
Can't he see my feelings?
He feels so close,
yet so far from me.
His warm embrace..
is one I wish never to leave.
His calming voice..
I wish to hear forever.
His joyous laugh..
is one which I hope never stops.
His sense of humor..
it never ceases to slay me.
His insane mind and inklings..
always reflect mine.
The smell of his cologne..
sends me into heaven.
His tears, how seldom they are..
pierce my soul like a knife.
When he falls so far down..
I always catch him and keep him safe.
When words escape him..
I fill it with the words he can't say.
He is always in the back of my mind..
and...I think I now know why.
Can't you see?
Ai Shiteru.  (I love you.)

by Alison Haney
©2007-2009 ~AlikatPunkRocker
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Author's Comments

This was created while thinking of someone special while I was stuck at Night School.....I still kinda have feelings for this guy but it's not as much. There is only one guy I want to be with in the whole world right now :)

Anyways yeah I hade this back during high school Junior year. So yeah. Enjoy!

Copyright me

DON'T STEAL! STEAL, AND THERE WILL BE WRATH! :rage:

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:iconeinnobztron:
great job on this one! :heart: it!

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Here's my question: why is it called common sense if it's so rare?
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it's important to take some time once in a while to stop and laugh at the roses
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:iconpurple-ninjas:
i like it !!~

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~~ When I close my eyes,
Reality overcomes me
I'm living a Lie.~~
:iconalikatpunkrocker:
Thanks so much again! You're so awesome! XD

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Icon made by =wewtXD Thanks ever so much!!!

"I would do anything Tim [Burton] wanted me to. You know - Have sex with an aardvark... I would do it." - Johnny Depp

The above quote....BAHAHAHAHA! JD = Teh Win.
:iconalikatpunkrocker:
Thankies :D

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Icon made by =wewtXD Thanks ever so much!!!

"I would do anything Tim [Burton] wanted me to. You know - Have sex with an aardvark... I would do it." - Johnny Depp

The above quote....BAHAHAHAHA! JD = Teh Win.
:iconeinnobztron:
welcome!

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Here's my question: why is it called common sense if it's so rare?
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it's important to take some time once in a while to stop and laugh at the roses
--
Project Reciprocation member --> [link]
:iconpurple-ninjas:
welcome ^^

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~~ When I close my eyes,
Reality overcomes me
I'm living a Lie.~~
:iconkanspeta:
that is so awesome

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:iconalikatpunkrocker:
XD Thanks!

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Icon made by =wewtXD Thanks ever so much!!!

"I would do anything Tim [Burton] wanted me to. You know - Have sex with an aardvark... I would do it." - Johnny Depp

The above quote....BAHAHAHAHA! JD = Teh Win.
:iconchewy9887:
Wow.... That is magnificent. Although they are your words, they are my feelings. I love when I read something that I can relate so closely to. I wanted to cry while reading it. I can completely understand all those feelings. (Especially right at this moment.) "Can't he see?" is a perfect title too. It's as if your heart would fail just because he's there and sometimes you wonder if he notices. I, in my case, wonder if he feels the same and is afraid to do anything about it. Wow... this perfectly fits my life at the moment. Awesome job.

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"What's up Bella?" He asked with a big grin.
I rolled my eyes, "Same old, same old."
"Yeah," he agreed, "bunch of Vampires trying to kill you. The usual."
"The usual."

From Stephenine Meyer's Eclipse

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